A Haiku

The sky shrouded in clouds

Rays break through.

A UFO landing?

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I don’t believe in UFOs, do you ?

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23 Responses

  1. This is great! I can picture the UFO hovering in the clouds.

  2. This is great! It’s vivid, and I can picture this UFO hovering in the clouds.

  3. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/16/finally-poetry-awards-for-poets-rally-week-14/

    three awards all for you,
    carry pride,
    have fun!

    Happy Friday!

  4. I really like this haiku poem, because it sings with resonance. Indeed, it moves the spirit. There is mystery and wonder in your description of the natural world. Writing poetry transport us to other worlds. Your imagery possesses deep color and tone. Words have so much power in them. Words cut deep through the soul. Yet, this poem expresses our humanity. So, keep sharing and telling the truth. Be well and do take care. Let God bring your strength and wisdom.

  5. haha. fun haiku…i dunno its a big universe out there…

  6. Nice haiku. 🙂

  7. Very cool haiku. Not the typical final line to a haiku stanza. Enjoyed. Thanks

  8. Short and sweet. UFO refers to anything of unknown origin in the sky and not just to alien space craft so the answer must be yes 🙂

  9. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/11/follow-jingle-to-make-your-blog-twinkle/

    awards for you,
    thank you for following me closely…

    you are one of the best!

  10. you did give me comment on 55,
    sorry for overlooking you,
    I never meant to,
    Please forgive me.

    I added your link under the awards list!

  11. Excellent haiku good Sir. I rather think that we came here from a ufo and I think that I will shut up now before everyone thinks I am a crazy lady!!

  12. Lovely haiku.

  13. A lovely Haiku. I neither believe nor disbelieve in UFO’s. I’ve never seen one in real life, but I’ve also never seen Antarctica in real life. Antarctica I’m pretty much convinced exists, so maybe UFO’s do, too. I’d need to see more proof, though. 🙂

  14. Happy Saturday!
    beautiful Haiku!

  15. Love the image and haiku…I wonder if such skies made people belive in UFO’s…visit with again when I return for holiday!

  16. Heyyyy Rahim I don’t believe in UFO’s either 😀 enjoyed your haiku,have a really good day “Happy Saturday”!

  17. Thank you Rahim!
    I managed to do it! Yahoooooooooo!!!
    I like the songs like in your player too.
    I have so many song list.
    Thank you so much for making me SO HAPPY today!
    hugs
    shakira

  18. simply fabulous picture. 🙂 and the poem too.

    i believe in UFOs and life outside earth-very strongly.

  19. Nice match of picture to poem. I certainly chuckled reading it. BTW, I love the blog name. Thanks for sharing these.

  20. Lol @Jingle.. so cute of you to say so!

    Lovely take on the picture… UFO is on your mind?
    lovely haiku. and it certainly makes you think… but of UFO?
    I am a believer… however strange.
    Met enough people to think that they are aliens. LOL

    Rahim, how do you activate the player in wordpress?
    I try doing that. but it does not show on the wordpress blog.
    I love your music!
    Have a great weekend.
    hugs to you and your lovely wife,
    shakira

  21. I have to say this haiku truly surprised me. I have mixed feelings. BTW love the music/video on you blog!

  22. no,
    I don’t believe it,
    but it does exist…
    Happy Friday!

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