Cinquains: Predators and Preys

Governments

Optimistic, unrealistic

Prying, lying, rallying

Packs of hungry wolves

Predators.

*****

Peoples

Meek, weak

Following , Complying , contributing

A herd of sheep

preys.

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9 Responses

  1. fantasitc political poem. punchy and straight edged. really enjoyed this one

  2. You are SO AWESOME!

    I love that you dare to try and you are so GOOD.
    Addictive right?

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  3. great!

    One thing though, I think the plural of ‘prey’ is ‘prey’. 🙂 Otherwise, great poem. Sadly, this seems to be what government is about today. I really wish we could do something to change this.

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  5. great words – strong poem. I like it 🙂

  6. Dear WW,

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  7. how clever you are,
    love your new work!
    😉

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